Hi André! I've been meaning to check out your blog before... My apologies for taking so long! Nice work so far! :) I love the sneaky walk you did in Class 1!
Cute turn! I like his little move up before he turns. I have a few suggestions... I'd have him start turning as soon as he comes down from his antic up (fr 16). On his pose at fr 28 and 76, I am not sure on which leg his weight is. Perhaps on fr 28, push Ballie a little screen right and forward (Since his left leg is taking off first). On fr 76, both his legs seem to come of from the same sphere. I`d rotate Ballie a little less so we can see both spheres connecting his legs to his body...and shift his body so his weight is more on one leg instead of in the middle.
Hope this helps at all... And I hope you are doing well André! :)
Hi André!
ReplyDeleteI've been meaning to check out your blog before... My apologies for taking so long! Nice work so far! :) I love the sneaky walk you did in Class 1!
Cute turn! I like his little move up before he turns. I have a few suggestions... I'd have him start turning as soon as he comes down from his antic up (fr 16). On his pose at fr 28 and 76, I am not sure on which leg his weight is. Perhaps on fr 28, push Ballie a little screen right and forward (Since his left leg is taking off first). On fr 76, both his legs seem to come of from the same sphere. I`d rotate Ballie a little less so we can see both spheres connecting his legs to his body...and shift his body so his weight is more on one leg instead of in the middle.
Hope this helps at all... And I hope you are doing well André! :)
Take care
Em